Storytelling Quote
Erie Stanley Gardner, of Perry Mason fame, told an aspiring
writer in a letter:
Don't say that the
villain is a mean man with a wicked wallop. Show him sliding
down from his horse in a rage because the animal jerks away from
him. Show him swing a terrific fist and crash the horse on the
nose. That gives the reader the idea of the wickedness of his
wallop. Then when the villain advances toward the hero with doubled
fist the reader gets some suspense because he's seen what happened
to the horse. But if you tell the reader the villain is bad and
has a mean wallop it's history, and the less history you get
into a yarn the better.
Fugate, F. L. and R. B. Fugate. 1980. Secrets of the world's
best-selling writer: The
storytelling techniques of Erle Stanley Gardner. New York:
William Morrow.
Sample Holiday
Poems and a Story
| What is
the holiday? |
Thai New Year
S.
|
Christmas
M.V.
|
Ramadan
N.K.
|
| What do you
see? |
The temple
in the morning |
Jesus is
born. |
Crescent
moon |
| What do you
smell? |
Perfumed
Powder |
Pine |
No smell |
| What do you
hear? |
"Let's
go pour somewater on somebody!" |
Noise of
firecrackers |
|
| What do you
eat (taste)? |
Sweet Thai desserts |
Tamales |
No taste |
| What do you
touch? |
Water and
Powder |
Hugs to everyone |
No touch |
| What is the
holiday? |
April 13
New Year |
Christmas |
Ramadan |
Christmas Memory
"I remember very well a special Christmas
for me when I was 6 years old. In the morning at 4:30 A.M. I
went to see the Christmas tree with my brother and sister, and
for me there was nothing. But for my brothers, many toys and
candies. I cried and went running to my room but when I entered
my room, it was full of toys for me with a note for me: 'Study
Harder!'"
Victor ©1989
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